Broadcast Project Script

SILICON VALLEY LEADERSHIP GROUP'S VOTERS REGISTRATION RALLY

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SOME MAY SAY THE YOUTH IS THE FUTURE OF AMERICA. THIS WAS EVIDENT TODAY AT THE SILICON VALLEY LEADERSHIP GROUP'S VOTERS REGISTRATION RALLY AT SAN JOSE STATE UNIVERSITY.

HIP HOP MUSIC WAS HEARD THROUGHOUT THE SAN JOSE STATE CAMPUS AS PEOPLE GATHERED IN THE CESAR CHAVEZ PLAZA AWAITING THE START OF THE EVENT. MARISELA (MAR-REE-SELL-A) HERNANDEZ, ASSISTANT VICE PRESIDENT OF CITY AFFAIRS BELIEVES THE EVENT IS A GREAT OPPORTUNITY TO REACH OUT TO YOUNG VOTERS.

IN THIS EVENT, POLITICAL FIGURES, LOCAL CELEBRITIES, AND STUDENTS HAVE ALL COME TOGETHER IN ORDER TO RAISE VOTER AWARENESS INCLUDING SOME MEMBERS OF THE SAN FRANCISCO 49ERS AND SAN JOSE MAYOR CHUCK REED.

REED ASKED EVERYONE TO VOTE IN THIS YEAR'S ELECTION AND REMEMBER TO VOTE ON OUR LOCAL PROPOSITIONS AS WELL. 49ERS TIGHT END DELANIE (DA-LANE-E) WALKER STRESSED THE IMPORTANCE OF GETTING THE YOUTH INVOLVED IN THE UPCOMING ELECTION.

THIS EVENT BROUGHT TOGETHER PEOPLE FROM ALL CULTURES, ETHNICITIES, AND POLITICAL ASSOCIATIONS. YET, REGARDLESS OF POLITICAL VIEWS AND PARTY AFFILIATION, ALL IN ATTENDANCE ENCOURAGED EVERYONE TO HEAD TO THE POLLS THIS NOVEMBER AND MAKE THEIR VOICE HEARD.

Broadcast News Story

WOMEN'S RACE WINNER DISQUALIFIED

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FIRST PLACE DID NOT WIN THE RACE AT THE NIKE WOMEN'S MARATHON IN SAN FRANCISCO ON SUNDAY. ARIEN O'CONNELL, A 24-YEAR OLD FROM NEW YORK CITY, CAME IN FIRST PLACE, BEATING RECORD TIMES, BUT DID NOT RECEIVE THE FIRST PLACE TROPHY. 

NIKE OFFICIALS CLAIM HER TIME DID NOT COUNT DUE TO THE FACT SHE HAD NOT CLASSIFIED HERSELF AS AN ELITE RUNNER. ALTHOUGH O'CONNELL RAN THE MARATHON IN LESS THAN THREE HOURS, THE TROPHY WAS AWARDED TO ANOTHER RUNNER WHO'S TIME CLOCKED IN OVER THREE HOURS.

DIRECTOR OF THE LONG DISTANCE RUNNING PROGRAM, JIM ESTES, EXPLAINED THAT THE ELITE RUNNING GROUP IS GIVEN A 20 MINUTE HEAD START, THEREFORE BY NOT RUNNING WITH THE PROPER GROUP, O'CONNELL WAS DISQUALIFIED.

O'CONNELL ADMITTED HER MISTAKE BUT REMAINED CONFIDENT "I'M A GOOD, SOLID RUNNER. I NEVER CONSIDERED MYSELF ELITE." IT SEEMS THAT THIS RACE WAS A MATTER OF OPINION AND NOT SPEED.

Broadcast Style Exercise

NORTHWEST AIRLINES CUTS TICKET PRICE

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NORTHWEST AIRLINES ANNOUNCE TODAY THAT IT IS CUTTING ITS DOMESTIC FARES BY UP TO 40 PERCENT FOR HOLIDAY TRAVELERS. 

CEO OF NORTHWEST AIRLINES, FRANK DEWITT SAID "WE LIKE TO THINK OF IT AS A HOLIDAY GIFT TO OUR CUSTOMERS."

THE TICKETS MUST BE PURCHASED BY FRIDAY FOR TRAVEL BETWEEN NOVEMBER 12 AND JANUARY 14 IN THE LOWER 48 STATES, ALASKA, AND CANADA.

DISCOUNTS VARY DEPENDING ON TRAVEL DATES AND ARE NOT AVAILABLE ON CERTAIN POPULAR DAYS, INCLUDING NOVEMBER 23, NOVEMBER 26, DECEMBER 23, AND DECEMBER 26.

WITH THE DISCOUNTED, NON-REFUNDABLE FARES, A PASSENGER COULD TRAVEL ROUND-TRIP BETWEEN BOSTON AND SAN FRANCISCO FOR 500 DOLLARS ON CERTAIN DAYS.

Feature Lead #2

Candles lead to a bigger party than expected.

By: Luis Saldana

Tulsa, Okla.

A 95-year old senior citizen goes out smokin'!

In celebration of a long life, the First United Methodist Church women's group in Tulsa, Okla., threw a birthday bash for senior citizen Mabel McCullough. McCullough, who turned 95 on Sept. 27, was presented with a carrot cake which held 95 candles.

The party was sure to be a blast. One guest, Eddi Carlin was in awe of the fire carrot cake, stating "there wasn't an inch to spare, by the time we had them all lit it looked like a torch." To know surprise to her guests, McCullough blew out the candles with a little help.

The birthday gal and her guests did not know that the smoke from the candles had set off a fire alarm in the building. When the time came to eat, 24 firefighters were standing in the doorway. 

"We had just sat down to eat when we saw them in the doorway." said Carlin. 

As a result of the alarm, five fire engines and two ladder companies had arrived at the building.

The smoking birthday party was amused Fire Chief Lonnie Lamb, who stated "In my 25 years on the job, I've seen a lot things set off a fire alarm, but I don't think I ever hard of one going off because of a birthday cake." The firefighters did not indulge in cake eating, but did pose for photos with the birthday crew.

Even at age 95, Mabel McCullough continues to go out smoking.

Copy Edit the World #2 (REVISED)

The above photo was found when I purchased a 12 pack of Rolling Rock beer at a Safeway Supermarket in San Jose. On the case of beer was a sticker reminding people about getting their flu shots.

Don't Forget Your Flu Shot?

should be...

Don't Forget Your Flu Shot.

This photo was taken at a parking lot in Sunnyvale. Clearly, someone forgot a letter or the letter was rubbed off over time.

Reserved Parkin

should be...

Reserved Parking

This photo was taken at a Chinese restaurant in Mountain View. The restaurant had their menu posted on their window, oddly enough they missed their error for their string beans.

Dry Satueed String Beans 

should be...

Dry Sauteed String Beans

This last photo was taken from the San Jose Mercury News sports section. If you look closely at the last paragraph on the right side, the first sentence contains an error.

That is good new for rookie forward Anthony Marrow.

should be...

That is good news for rookie forward Anthony Marrow.

These photos were taken in or around the Bay Area.

Real-Life Reporting News Story (REVISED)

Deep in the heart of the Silicon Valley, along the painted concrete blocks of San Jose State University's Cesar Chavez plaza, the political force of Hip Hop music is heard. A crowd formed in the plaza, political figures and local celebrities gathered on stage. These individuals partaked in the Voter's Registration Rally put forth by the Silicon Valley Leadership Group, co-sponsored by San Jose State University and West Valley College. Many prominent political figures were amongst those in attendance, including California Secretary of State Debra Bowen, and San Jose Mayor, Chuck Reed. The city of San Jose hopes that this event will increase voter awareness of local propositions and encourage voting amongst the youth. Administrative Assistant to the Associate Vice President of San Jose State Public Affairs, Marisela Hernandez stated, "This is a great opportunity for the city of San Jose and the state of California to reach out to young voters."

The event began with a keynote speech was given by Mayor Chuck Reed. Reed did not endorse any candidate but did stress the importance of voting for local propositions which are vital to our city. While discussing the local propositions the Mayor said, "voting for our next president is important, but don't forget the local propositions at the bottom of your ballot." After the Mayor finished his speech, several members of the San Francisco 49ers hit the stage; this gained much interest from the students. Delanie Walker, tight end for the San Francisco 49ers, stated that the youth will decide this years election, "we need to get the word out to the youth, so they don't miss the boat this time."

In closing, California Secretary of State, Debra Bowen, reminded all students to take part in this year's historic election, and asked those who aren't registered voters to register at the registration table set up along the plaza. This event brought together various people from all cultures, ethnicities, and political affiliations, yet regardless of political views or party affiliation, all in attendance encouraged everyone to head to the polls this November.

Top News Story 5 (REVISED)

Obama accuses McCain of looking for distractions

Sen. Barack Obama has claimed that Sen. John McCain's campaign is lanching "Swift boat-style attacks" on him instead of addressing the country's problems. Alaska Governor and McCain running mate Sarah Palin claimed that Obama associated "with terrorirsts who targeted their own country."

Palin questions Obama's association with William Ayers, a member of the Vietnam-era Weather Underground. Evidence proves Ayers and Obama worked together on community boards for education and hosted a political events early in Obama's career. Clearly, Palin's claims are over-exaggerated if not false, yet the McCain camp is gambling on taking advantage of the American public's ignorance.

Obama responded to the McCain campaign saying "That's what you do when you're out of touch, out of ideas, and running out of time." The McCain campaign continued to insist that these are "true facts" and not "smears."

Obama accuses McCain of looking for distractions (story link)

We are four weeks away from the 2008 presidential election, so one can expect these attacks between campaigns to continue. While dirty tactics are being used by both sides of the ticket, citizens of America must remember to retain focus on relevant issues within the country.

It is not surprising that the McCain campaign is quick to pull out the terrorist card on Obama. It was only a few months ago when they made associations with Obama and terrorism due to Sen. Barack Obama's middle name which is Hussien. One must not be ignorant enough to let these attacks persuade them to make a decision of vote based on smear tactics.

These smear campaign tatics by the McCain camp may backfire in the end. Claiming that Barack Obama is affiliated with terrorists only screams out wekaness of a faltering campaign. Both camps better be ready for these last weeks leading up to the election, because accusations, over-exaggerations, and finger-pointing will continue from both sides. I guess the truth hurts sometimes.

Video of Sen. Barack Obama's repsonse to attacks...

REVISED ADDITION TO STORY...

Impact : This news story will have major impact on the lives on not only all Americans but the entire world as well. This upcoming election is one of the most important elections of my lifetime, the president selected in this election will have to lead America out of a war disaster and financial crisis, therefore this story impacts everyone.

Timeliness : This story is very current with the political issues at hand and contains relevance to the upcoming election which is only a few weeks away.

Prominence : This story focuses on the two individuals that will lead the country of the free world into the next decade, this individuals are of great importance.

Conflict : There is conflict within this story as it showcases the dirty tactics used with political campaigns by both sides of the ticket.