Saturday, October 18, 2008

Copy Edit the World #2



Only food & drink purchased on these premisis to be consumed.

should be...

Only food & drink purchased on these premises to be consumed.


This is a low water useage toilet. 
Please use toilet paper sparingly.

should be...

This is a low water usage toilet.
Please use toilet paper sparingly.


She declared her love for hin

should be...

She declared her love for HIM



2 comments:

camccune said...

Good corrections, but please include where you found these to receive full credit.

camccune said...

Seriously, these look like they were pulled off a "typos" web page, and I don't give credit for typos found by others. So if they're yours, let me know where you found them. Otherwise, no credit.