BROADCAST SCRIPT

THE GOLDEN AGE OF HIP-HOP SEEMS A LONG TIME AWAY FROM THE BAY AREA RAP SCENE. ONCE A DOMINANT FORCE ON THE CHARTS, THE BAY AREA HAS FADED TO AN UNCREATIVE REMENANT OF WHAT IT ONCE WAS.

TODAY, THE BAY AREA REMAINS IN SEARCH OF A NEW STAR THAT CONTAINS THE CREATVITY AND ORIGINALITY THAT MADE THE NORTHERN CALIFORNIA RAP SCENE AN INGENIOUS MUSICAL PLAYGROUND. READY TO TAKE HIS PLACE IN BAY AREA HISTORY IS THE JACKA. ORIGINATING FROM THE NEIGBORHOODS OF PITTSBURGH CALIFORNIA, THE JACKA LOOKS TO TAKE OVER THE BAY AREA RAP SCENE WITH SOULFUL PRODUCTION, ORIGINAL LYRICS, AND RAW TALENT.

YET TO ACCUIRE A RECORD DEAL, THE JACKA REMAINS ONE OF THE MOST SOUGHT AFTER ARTISTS ON THE WESTCOAST. SUCCESSFUL IN THE INDEPENDENT MARKET, THE JACKA LOOKS TO HIT THE MAINSTREAM WITH HIS THIRD ALBUM, TEAR GAS.
TEAR GAS IS ONE OF THE MOST ANTICIPATED ALBUMS TO HIT THE BAY AREA IN YEARS. THE ALBUM WILL INCLUDE APPEARANCES FROM LOCAL RAPPERS AS WELL AS MAINSTREAM ARTISTS FROM AROUND THE NATION.

IN DIRE NEED OF A NEW STAR, THE BAY AREA HAS LABELED THE JACKA AS ONE OF THE ARTISTS THAT WILL REVIVE THE SCENE FROM THE RECENT MUSICAL SLUMP. THE JACKA LOOKS NOT TO DISAPPOINT, AND IS READY TO CLAIM HIS CROWN AS BAY AREA RAP KING.

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Magazine Final Project

During the Golden Age of Hip-Hop in the mid-90’s, the Bay Area rap scene was thriving with creativity. Originality was evident within Bay Area rap music and artists were capitalizing on successful money deals offered by major record labels. This era helped launch the careers of acts such as E-40, Too Short, and late Tupac Shakur. Classic material and ingenuity was prominent within Bay Area music and success was indisputable when surveying the record charts. Unfortunately for Bay Area artists, success faded toward the beginning of the new millennium and sales became lackluster remnants of the past. The Bay Area rap scene had been forgotten. Today, the Bay Area is in search of a new star that contains the creativity and originality that once made the Northern California rap music scene a triumphant and lucrative market. The Jacka looks to take his place at the top of the vacant Bay Area throne.

The Jacka originated from the neighborhoods of Pittsburgh, California. The young rapper separates himself from the conventional sound of the Bay Area streets, with soulful samples in production, originality in lyrics, and raw talent and hustle. Yet to acquire a record deal, The Jacka is one of the most sought after artists on the West Coast. Prosperous in the independent record market, The Jacka has released several albums in the past years and has developed a strong following in the underground rap scene. His first album, self-titled, The Jacka was released in 2002 and pushed over 25,000 units independently. His second album The Jack Artist was released in 2005 only selling 15,000 units independently due to weak promotion and small financial backing.

In dire need of a new star, the Bay Area rap scene has labeled The Jacka as one of the few artists that will bring the West Coast back to the forefront of rap music. Showcasing creativity, consistency, and distinct sound, The Jacka is ready to drop a classic album with hopes of mainstream success. The rappers third album Tear Gas is one of the most anticipated albums in the Bay Area and is set to be released early next year. The first single from the album, All Over Me is receiving nationwide radio airplay support, building more anticipation for the rapper’s biggest project to date. Tear Gas will include appearances from local Bay Area rappers as well as mainstream artists from around the nation.

With pressure building from fans and record labels, the Jacka looks to not disappoint. A major record label deal is in The Jacka’s near future, but the rapper promises not to lose his originality and sound that made him the artist he is today. With his momentum continuing to build and an organization of Bay Area rappers supporting him, The Jacka is ready to take over 2009 and claim his spot on the top of the Bay Area rap scene. In addition to the Bay Area, The Jacka looks to take his music worldwide sticking to his formula of originality and strong work ethic. With appearances on collaboration albums, mixtape releases, and concert appearances, The Jacka remains one of the most hardest working men in Hip-Hop. The Jacka is ready for nationwide fame, major label success, and will not stop until he brings the Bay Area back to the mainstream of rap music.

Fast Facts Box

Who: Rap Artist The Jacka

What: New Album Tear Gas

When: Early 2009

Where: The Bay Area, Northern California, West Coast

Why: One of the most highly anticipated albums to hit the Bay Area in years

Online Writing Exercise

Yahoo News

A) Yes, the news items on the site did reflect immediacy. News stories are updated within hours and minutes of them breaking on Reuters and the Associated Press.

B) Yes, the stories on the site do attempt to save the reader time by giving small summaries of the story on the main page, which you can click if you need further information. 

C) It is very quick and easy to get information due to the layout of the site. All news is separated into sections and headlines are posted with the time and sources. 

D) Visual and verbal information are posted. Almost all stories contain photos along with story summaries. 

E) While looking at the main page, there is a list of headlines and a list of sections that you can click for easier scanning.

F) Stories are broken into sections, not chunks.

G) Stories provide hyperlinks to the full articles of the story selected. 

H) There is not a specific section for readers to "talk back" but there are opinion and blog sections where readers can post their comments.

I) The site uses plenty of multimedia to enhance its appeal, including audio, video, and slideshows. 

Law and Ethics Exercise

Scenario #1

If presented with this situation I would read the documents. If the documents proved the woman's involvement in illegal activities, I feel the the public should be notified of this. I would discuss the situation with my editor and push for the information to be released to the public. I would not take the documents, but I would make sure to take down extensive notes and perhaps some photos with my camera. 

Situations like this can break huge leaks and be the ground breaking story needed to jump start a reporter's career. Many of America's great scandals such as Watergate, have been reported through leaks such as this. Therefore I would definitely break this story.

Scenario #2

I would not take a job at a local nursing home in order to break a story for my paper. I feel it is ethically wrong to disguise oneself in order to gain access to information. Although some media outlets do partake in disguising in investigative journalism, it is still a misrepresentation of ones self. It is not apart of my job to lie, misrepresent, and deceive people. 

Scenario #3

You may not use quotes as your own, even if you heard them yourself. Journalists are always required to site their sources. The proper way to use the quotes would be to obtain them directly from the source and cite the sources. Otherwise, you may lose credibility as a journalism by stealing quotes. 

Play Editor

The story presented contains no solid proof that the professor sexually harassed the student and compromises the principles of ethics within journalism. Reporting the truth with accurate information is very important to a journalist credibility. Libel lawsuits can be filed against reporters if inaccurate information is distributed. I would completely dismiss the story from publication in order to avoid slander and libel liability. 

Topical Blog Post #4

Kobe Bryant has recently released his brand new sneaker, the Kobe IV. This latest signature shoe from Nike, is a low top shoe. Low top shoes are unheard of in the basketball sneaker world, therefore Kobe is trying to be a trend setter. 

I am a big fan of sneakers and spend loads of cash on shoes. While looking at my empty wallet and the brand new Kobe sneakers, I questioned my spending on materialistic things. I wondered a little about how many children had to make those shoes. 

Indonesian labor advocates have accused Nike of employing Indonesian children under 16-years-old to produce their sneakers, paying them less than 2 dollars per day. Even Michael Jordan's sneakers were involved in a child labor scandal.

I am not going to stop buying sneakers from Nike, but I feel we must take time to remember where the shoes come from. As Americans we should understand how much money we spend on materialistic things and be thankful for the opportunities we have at home. 

Focus Story Structure

Running routes, making tackles, and winning the game are concerns of high school football players. This was no different for 17-year-old Pete Stenhoff of Chula Vista High School. Today, it is game over for the young football player as he struggles to win a diploma and survive the game of life.

"I knew the risks involved when I decided to play football" says Stenhoff, "I wish I would have known how bad it could be." he added. 

Stenhoff was seriously injured in his junior year when he rammed head on into another football players chest, cracking his vertebrae in his spine. Now confined to a wheelchair for life, he has missed the chance to graduate with his class and has to take correspondence courses in order to receive his diploma.

High school football is a dangerous activity for young students. 20,000 injuries occur within the sport each year, 12 percent of them disabling the victims. Thirteen high school players died last year and thirty-five percent of injuries were to the neck or head. Critics blame the helmets.

Stenhoff is not blaming anyone for his injuries and is not bitter. The young man will continue his fight to finish his schooling and to live a normal life. 

Find That Lead

DIRECT ADDRESS LEAD

Look Up Tonight For a Spectacular Treat In The Sky

Times Online UK

If the full moon tonight looks unusually large, it is not your imagination – it is the biggest and brightest full moon to be seen for 15 years.

This is an example of a Direct Address lead because the author using second-person narrative to address the reader. This is obvious in the "it is not YOUR imagination" line. 

SCENE SETTER LEAD

Christmas' Season High 35 Points Lead Temple Past No. 8 Tennessee

ESPN (Associated Press)

PHILADELPHIA -- Temple students dressed for an upset, wearing Santa Claus hats and white beards and some even held signs that read "Merry Christmas!"

This is an example of a Scene Setter lead because the author describes the scene before the college game, setting up the story.

Topical Blog Post #3

This dream is based on a true story. 

At times, I feel that most of my dreams could be made into some type of feature film or horror story. Since I was a child my dreams have been very vivid, compelling, and sometimes down right strange. Surely my dreams must have a purpose, but I have yet to figure out what that is. 

Unfortunately, most of my dreams are forgotten within a few hours of awakening from sleep. Only the dreams which create shocking interest within my mind allow me to remember them for longer periods of time. 

Some people may feel it is not important to remember their dreams, but I believe in the importance and purpose of remembering dreams.

This leads me to ask the question, what if you could record your dreams and watch them back after you awake from sleep? 

Now, this is possible with advances in current technology unlocking the secret world of dreams. Japanese scientists have created a device that enables the processing and imagery of dreams as experience in the brain to appear on a screen. 

This advancement in technology will allow us to further explore our dreams with greater detail than simply recalling a memory or writing down a dream experience. Secrets of our past and glimpses of the future may be revealed when analyzing our dreams. 

Sometimes, I felt it was difficult to fully describe some of my more complicated dreams. With this type of technology, individuals will be able to play the dreams over an image to give another person the full experience of their dream, allow others to enter another's secret world of dreams.  

Topical Blog Post #2

The Auto-Tune Trend in the Music Industry

Using the Auto-Tuner is a recent trend in the music industry. The Auto-Tune effect is the robotic voice sound that changes the pitch of a singer or rapper’s tone. This voice pitch magic was first used in the 80’s, by rock star Peter Gabriel and then by funk legends Roger and Zapp. Recently, Tallahassee R&B singer T-Pain has made millions of dollars off this simple studio effect. Listening to the new Kanye West album, “808’s and Heartbreak”, I noticed the rapper jumped on the Auto-Tune bandwagon as well. On the album, West used the Auto-Tune on every track and sung every lyric. Surprisingly, the rapper opted to sing all tracks, not rapping at all. This is disheartening to hear one of Hip Hop’s most creative and promising stars following a Pop trend.

Many Hip Hop artists have ventured into the Auto-Tune world as well, including Snoop Dogg, Lil Wayne, Akon, Rick Ross, and 50 Cent. This trend is a lack of creativity. The Auto-Tune effect distracts the listener from the lyrics, allowing artists to create lyrics without relevance or substance. Unfortunately people will still listen to this type of music because it sounds interesting due to the Auto-Tune. These artists sound like robots and have sold out to the industry to make a quick buck. Today’s average listener consumes large amounts of dance trendy Hip Hop and this auto-tune craze is the pinnacle of nonsense within the Hip Hop world. 

Yet, there is hope within the Hip Hop culture. There is a strong movement of conscious rap in the underground realms of Hip Hop. Artists such as Living Legends, Hieroglyphics, and Dilated Peoples promote music, which contains meaningful lyrics with soulful backdrops of beats, something, Kanye used to do as well. I am eagerly awaiting the day the Auto-Tune trend is over and we can return to restoring the heart of Hip Hop.

Topical Blog Post #1

Technology and the Obama Campaign

Technology plays a major role in my life. I also noticed that technology played an unprecedented role in this year’s presidential election. President-Elect Barack Obama’s victory can be credited to a well-run campaign, heavily influenced by technology and multi-media marketing tools. Obama’s campaign used blogs, social networking and texts to expand political awareness among the public, and ultimately secure a win for the presidency.

The voter turnout on Election Day was huge, surpassing experts predictions. The use of technology enabled the Obama campaign to form a direct relationship with the general public. This campaign was one of the most effective campaigns using new technology within the media. Instead of the normal phone call to home Obama supporters would receive a text with the information needed to help them find a polling station. 

Technology allowed for Obama supporters to engage in the multi-media campaign and created a closer bond with the candidate. The campaign was hip, in tune with technology, and socially conscious, sealing the victory for Barack Obama. This election was historic not only for the reason that we now have our first black president, but also for the heavy use of technology. I believe we will continue to see campaigns follow in the footsteps of the Obama campaign in order to achieve success. 

My Kind of Magazine

For the past 2 years I have had a free subscription to the Hip Hop publication XXL. I am a music driven person so I love any type of publication which features music, but I tend to enjoy the ones that focus on Hip Hop. Since I was a young teenager, I have been reading music publications including The Source, Rolling Stone, VIBE, Murder Dog, Blender, and most recently XXL.

I enjoy XXL because the magazine covers the urban music genre in a direct fact driven way. Most magazines tend to overlook the Hip Hop genre unless it is commercialized Pop Rap. Other publications seem to push agendas of record labels and favorite certain artists, XXL seems to be more diverse than the other magazines featuring articles from all artists and honest album reviews. Although the XXL publication has actually become slightly weak with their content within the past couple years, they have the respect of the industry due to their past work. Futhermore, the magazine has a great online community, which allows readers to communicate with the editors and other readers to share their opinions and suggestions. 

XXL magazine is my magazine of choice for the moment, it may be partially due to the fact that I have a free subscription. But I will always be interested in reading music publications. Maybe I will be reading The Source again in 2009. Overall, it is great material as long as it is music related, Hip Hop or not. 

Reflections on the Elections

I have participated in the past 2 presidential elections. Yet, both those elections were not as historical as the presidential election of 2008.

After enduring 8 years of the worst presidential administration of all time, this country needs a change. As a country, we endured terrorist attacks, economic downfall, hurricanes, and military invasions. The American constitution was disregarded and our liberty and rights were taken away. Yet, when George W. Bush is asked about his legacy he states "I liberated Iraqis". 

Within these past 8 years, this country has been kept in fear through belief of a constant threat against our nation. This fear is instilled within our people to keep us ignorant to the actions of our government, thus allowing us to be subject to the diction of the administration. 

This why there is such a dire need for change within our country. In this election, I saw a country come together through media, music, education, and youth movements in order to spark a revolution to ensure a change of administration. 

I first learned about Barack Obama back in 2004 with his role in the United State senate, I knew the man had a bright future, but I didn't think he would become president so quickly. Unlike our last president, Obama is charming, engaging, well spoken, and passionate about his work within this country.

Overall I am proud to have taken part in this historical election. I don't believe Barack Obama is going to be the perfect president, but he seems to be the lesser of the 2 evils. Although change was promised, Obama is already picking top Washington insiders to his Cabinet. The new president-elect is hiring people with experience into his administration but it seems as if it is more of the same. Only time will tell if this is a true change for this country or just the same game with different people. 

FOG Index Assignment

For my FOG Index assignment, I decided to use a paragraph from my recent term paper on blogs. This seemed to be the proper sample of my writing due to the fact I am posting this on a blog. Below is the paragraph...

"This technology must be understood by individuals within public relations campaigns of company due to the fact they are used and understood by the general public. In today’s technology driven world, blogs are the quintessential tool for providing good public relations for any company. Blogs give companies and their employees their own voice on the web as well as a place to collect and share ideas and pertinent information with customers and potential customers, thus making corporate blogs a great public relations tactic for any company."

In my results,  I had 28.6667 words per sentence, which 17 hard words. The total for this equation is 28.66 + 17 = 45.66 x 0.4 = 18.26. According to the text, a reader would have to have a college education to understand my writing. I feel this is a little over exaggerated, and it seems that the results are based more on the number of hard words within my writing then the actual content. Maybe next time I shouldn't use a term paper as the sample for my writing. 

Got What It Takes Quiz

On the Got What It Takes To Be A Reporter quiz, I scored a total 0f 27 points. The score puts me in the second category. According to the category list, I am a solid contender to be for a successful journalism career. I've got the personality and ability that a good reporter requires.

I was actually surprised by the score that I received from this test. Although I do enjoy this journalism class and enjoy world news and events, I never thought that I would be journalist. My minor is public relations which is the reason I am taking this class. After taking this test and this class I had to second guess my major. Maybe I am in the wrong field. I do enjoy writing but I do not want to be a journalist nor a reporter. One of the sections on the test where I missed points is the first question which has to do with reading. I do not like reading books, but do enjoy reading a lot of information in newspapers, online sources, and magazines. Therefore, in my opinion, I feel that I might not be a good fit for journalism. Overall, this test was an interesting eye opener to see where I stand within the journalism community.

Broadcast Project

Broadcast Project Script

SILICON VALLEY LEADERSHIP GROUP'S VOTERS REGISTRATION RALLY

60 SECONDS

SOME MAY SAY THE YOUTH IS THE FUTURE OF AMERICA. THIS WAS EVIDENT TODAY AT THE SILICON VALLEY LEADERSHIP GROUP'S VOTERS REGISTRATION RALLY AT SAN JOSE STATE UNIVERSITY.

HIP HOP MUSIC WAS HEARD THROUGHOUT THE SAN JOSE STATE CAMPUS AS PEOPLE GATHERED IN THE CESAR CHAVEZ PLAZA AWAITING THE START OF THE EVENT. MARISELA (MAR-REE-SELL-A) HERNANDEZ, ASSISTANT VICE PRESIDENT OF CITY AFFAIRS BELIEVES THE EVENT IS A GREAT OPPORTUNITY TO REACH OUT TO YOUNG VOTERS.

IN THIS EVENT, POLITICAL FIGURES, LOCAL CELEBRITIES, AND STUDENTS HAVE ALL COME TOGETHER IN ORDER TO RAISE VOTER AWARENESS INCLUDING SOME MEMBERS OF THE SAN FRANCISCO 49ERS AND SAN JOSE MAYOR CHUCK REED.

REED ASKED EVERYONE TO VOTE IN THIS YEAR'S ELECTION AND REMEMBER TO VOTE ON OUR LOCAL PROPOSITIONS AS WELL. 49ERS TIGHT END DELANIE (DA-LANE-E) WALKER STRESSED THE IMPORTANCE OF GETTING THE YOUTH INVOLVED IN THE UPCOMING ELECTION.

THIS EVENT BROUGHT TOGETHER PEOPLE FROM ALL CULTURES, ETHNICITIES, AND POLITICAL ASSOCIATIONS. YET, REGARDLESS OF POLITICAL VIEWS AND PARTY AFFILIATION, ALL IN ATTENDANCE ENCOURAGED EVERYONE TO HEAD TO THE POLLS THIS NOVEMBER AND MAKE THEIR VOICE HEARD.

Broadcast News Story

WOMEN'S RACE WINNER DISQUALIFIED

60 SECONDS

FIRST PLACE DID NOT WIN THE RACE AT THE NIKE WOMEN'S MARATHON IN SAN FRANCISCO ON SUNDAY. ARIEN O'CONNELL, A 24-YEAR OLD FROM NEW YORK CITY, CAME IN FIRST PLACE, BEATING RECORD TIMES, BUT DID NOT RECEIVE THE FIRST PLACE TROPHY. 

NIKE OFFICIALS CLAIM HER TIME DID NOT COUNT DUE TO THE FACT SHE HAD NOT CLASSIFIED HERSELF AS AN ELITE RUNNER. ALTHOUGH O'CONNELL RAN THE MARATHON IN LESS THAN THREE HOURS, THE TROPHY WAS AWARDED TO ANOTHER RUNNER WHO'S TIME CLOCKED IN OVER THREE HOURS.

DIRECTOR OF THE LONG DISTANCE RUNNING PROGRAM, JIM ESTES, EXPLAINED THAT THE ELITE RUNNING GROUP IS GIVEN A 20 MINUTE HEAD START, THEREFORE BY NOT RUNNING WITH THE PROPER GROUP, O'CONNELL WAS DISQUALIFIED.

O'CONNELL ADMITTED HER MISTAKE BUT REMAINED CONFIDENT "I'M A GOOD, SOLID RUNNER. I NEVER CONSIDERED MYSELF ELITE." IT SEEMS THAT THIS RACE WAS A MATTER OF OPINION AND NOT SPEED.

Broadcast Style Exercise

NORTHWEST AIRLINES CUTS TICKET PRICE

30 SECONDS

NORTHWEST AIRLINES ANNOUNCE TODAY THAT IT IS CUTTING ITS DOMESTIC FARES BY UP TO 40 PERCENT FOR HOLIDAY TRAVELERS. 

CEO OF NORTHWEST AIRLINES, FRANK DEWITT SAID "WE LIKE TO THINK OF IT AS A HOLIDAY GIFT TO OUR CUSTOMERS."

THE TICKETS MUST BE PURCHASED BY FRIDAY FOR TRAVEL BETWEEN NOVEMBER 12 AND JANUARY 14 IN THE LOWER 48 STATES, ALASKA, AND CANADA.

DISCOUNTS VARY DEPENDING ON TRAVEL DATES AND ARE NOT AVAILABLE ON CERTAIN POPULAR DAYS, INCLUDING NOVEMBER 23, NOVEMBER 26, DECEMBER 23, AND DECEMBER 26.

WITH THE DISCOUNTED, NON-REFUNDABLE FARES, A PASSENGER COULD TRAVEL ROUND-TRIP BETWEEN BOSTON AND SAN FRANCISCO FOR 500 DOLLARS ON CERTAIN DAYS.

Feature Lead #2

Candles lead to a bigger party than expected.

By: Luis Saldana

Tulsa, Okla.

A 95-year old senior citizen goes out smokin'!

In celebration of a long life, the First United Methodist Church women's group in Tulsa, Okla., threw a birthday bash for senior citizen Mabel McCullough. McCullough, who turned 95 on Sept. 27, was presented with a carrot cake which held 95 candles.

The party was sure to be a blast. One guest, Eddi Carlin was in awe of the fire carrot cake, stating "there wasn't an inch to spare, by the time we had them all lit it looked like a torch." To know surprise to her guests, McCullough blew out the candles with a little help.

The birthday gal and her guests did not know that the smoke from the candles had set off a fire alarm in the building. When the time came to eat, 24 firefighters were standing in the doorway. 

"We had just sat down to eat when we saw them in the doorway." said Carlin. 

As a result of the alarm, five fire engines and two ladder companies had arrived at the building.

The smoking birthday party was amused Fire Chief Lonnie Lamb, who stated "In my 25 years on the job, I've seen a lot things set off a fire alarm, but I don't think I ever hard of one going off because of a birthday cake." The firefighters did not indulge in cake eating, but did pose for photos with the birthday crew.

Even at age 95, Mabel McCullough continues to go out smoking.

Copy Edit the World #2 (REVISED)

The above photo was found when I purchased a 12 pack of Rolling Rock beer at a Safeway Supermarket in San Jose. On the case of beer was a sticker reminding people about getting their flu shots.

Don't Forget Your Flu Shot?

should be...

Don't Forget Your Flu Shot.

This photo was taken at a parking lot in Sunnyvale. Clearly, someone forgot a letter or the letter was rubbed off over time.

Reserved Parkin

should be...

Reserved Parking

This photo was taken at a Chinese restaurant in Mountain View. The restaurant had their menu posted on their window, oddly enough they missed their error for their string beans.

Dry Satueed String Beans 

should be...

Dry Sauteed String Beans

This last photo was taken from the San Jose Mercury News sports section. If you look closely at the last paragraph on the right side, the first sentence contains an error.

That is good new for rookie forward Anthony Marrow.

should be...

That is good news for rookie forward Anthony Marrow.

These photos were taken in or around the Bay Area.

Real-Life Reporting News Story (REVISED)

Deep in the heart of the Silicon Valley, along the painted concrete blocks of San Jose State University's Cesar Chavez plaza, the political force of Hip Hop music is heard. A crowd formed in the plaza, political figures and local celebrities gathered on stage. These individuals partaked in the Voter's Registration Rally put forth by the Silicon Valley Leadership Group, co-sponsored by San Jose State University and West Valley College. Many prominent political figures were amongst those in attendance, including California Secretary of State Debra Bowen, and San Jose Mayor, Chuck Reed. The city of San Jose hopes that this event will increase voter awareness of local propositions and encourage voting amongst the youth. Administrative Assistant to the Associate Vice President of San Jose State Public Affairs, Marisela Hernandez stated, "This is a great opportunity for the city of San Jose and the state of California to reach out to young voters."

The event began with a keynote speech was given by Mayor Chuck Reed. Reed did not endorse any candidate but did stress the importance of voting for local propositions which are vital to our city. While discussing the local propositions the Mayor said, "voting for our next president is important, but don't forget the local propositions at the bottom of your ballot." After the Mayor finished his speech, several members of the San Francisco 49ers hit the stage; this gained much interest from the students. Delanie Walker, tight end for the San Francisco 49ers, stated that the youth will decide this years election, "we need to get the word out to the youth, so they don't miss the boat this time."

In closing, California Secretary of State, Debra Bowen, reminded all students to take part in this year's historic election, and asked those who aren't registered voters to register at the registration table set up along the plaza. This event brought together various people from all cultures, ethnicities, and political affiliations, yet regardless of political views or party affiliation, all in attendance encouraged everyone to head to the polls this November.

Top News Story 5 (REVISED)

Obama accuses McCain of looking for distractions

Sen. Barack Obama has claimed that Sen. John McCain's campaign is lanching "Swift boat-style attacks" on him instead of addressing the country's problems. Alaska Governor and McCain running mate Sarah Palin claimed that Obama associated "with terrorirsts who targeted their own country."

Palin questions Obama's association with William Ayers, a member of the Vietnam-era Weather Underground. Evidence proves Ayers and Obama worked together on community boards for education and hosted a political events early in Obama's career. Clearly, Palin's claims are over-exaggerated if not false, yet the McCain camp is gambling on taking advantage of the American public's ignorance.

Obama responded to the McCain campaign saying "That's what you do when you're out of touch, out of ideas, and running out of time." The McCain campaign continued to insist that these are "true facts" and not "smears."

Obama accuses McCain of looking for distractions (story link)

We are four weeks away from the 2008 presidential election, so one can expect these attacks between campaigns to continue. While dirty tactics are being used by both sides of the ticket, citizens of America must remember to retain focus on relevant issues within the country.

It is not surprising that the McCain campaign is quick to pull out the terrorist card on Obama. It was only a few months ago when they made associations with Obama and terrorism due to Sen. Barack Obama's middle name which is Hussien. One must not be ignorant enough to let these attacks persuade them to make a decision of vote based on smear tactics.

These smear campaign tatics by the McCain camp may backfire in the end. Claiming that Barack Obama is affiliated with terrorists only screams out wekaness of a faltering campaign. Both camps better be ready for these last weeks leading up to the election, because accusations, over-exaggerations, and finger-pointing will continue from both sides. I guess the truth hurts sometimes.

Video of Sen. Barack Obama's repsonse to attacks...

REVISED ADDITION TO STORY...

Impact : This news story will have major impact on the lives on not only all Americans but the entire world as well. This upcoming election is one of the most important elections of my lifetime, the president selected in this election will have to lead America out of a war disaster and financial crisis, therefore this story impacts everyone.

Timeliness : This story is very current with the political issues at hand and contains relevance to the upcoming election which is only a few weeks away.

Prominence : This story focuses on the two individuals that will lead the country of the free world into the next decade, this individuals are of great importance.

Conflict : There is conflict within this story as it showcases the dirty tactics used with political campaigns by both sides of the ticket.

Copy Edit the World #2

Only food & drink purchased on these premisis to be consumed.

should be...

Only food & drink purchased on these premises to be consumed.

This is a low water useage toilet. 

Please use toilet paper sparingly.

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This is a low water usage toilet.

Please use toilet paper sparingly.


She declared her love for hin

should be...

She declared her love for HIM

Real-Life Reporting News Story

On September 23rd, the Silicon Valley Leadership Group held a voters registration rally at San Jose State University in the 7th street plaza. The purpose of this event was to increase voter awareness of local propositions on the tickets, as well as encourage voting among young people.  

The event was co-sponsored by San Jose State University and West Valley Community College, both school's presidents were in attendance. Additional attendees included members of the San Francisco 49ers, local news anchors and state elected officials. Regardless of political views or party affiliation, all in attendance encouraged everyone to head to the polls on November 4th. 

The rally began with Hip Hop music being spun by the DJ's of SJSU's radio station 90.5FM KSJS. The music gained attention from students that is when a crowd began to form around the stage. Shortly thereafter, an opening speech was given by the San Jose State University student president, followed by a keynote speech by San Jose Mayor Chuck Reed. Mayor Reed did not endorse any candidate but did stress the importance of voting for local propositions, which are vital to our city. After the Mayor finished his speech, several members of the San Francisco 49ers hit the stage; this gained much interest from the students.

In closing the San Jose State University band played the school fight song, and the California Secretary of State, gave the closing speech. The last election held within our country had a lack of young voters at the polls. This event was put forth through the city of San Jose to reach out to young people. The Silicon Valley Leadership Group provided music such as Hip Hop and gave students the chance to meet local celebrity athletes such as the 49ers. Yet, most importantly, the message within the event was not lost, and many students registered to vote for the first time on this day at the registering booths located around the main stage. Overall, the voters rally was a success due to the fact of the great number of people in attendance and the smooth flow of the events held within the rally. 

AP Style Exercise #5 (S-Z)

1) When he heard the building plan for the new high school had been rejected, Bill pulled out his stationary to write a letter of protest. 

2) Ben really knows his Scriptures, but he knows little about the Talmud or the Shariah.

3) Her home in upstate New York is surprisingly ultramodern and unique for its middle-class neighborhood.

4) To celebrate Veteran's Day, the anniversary of the armistice that ended World War I, troops of former soldiers will march down Main Street carrying U.S. flags.

5) Word-of-mouth has it that Ellen will wind up with the only "A" in the class.

6) When Sara spotted the Louis L'Amour paperback, she asked whose book it was. She couldn't believe it was John's ; after all nobody reads Westerns anymore. She had no idea he was such a weirdo.

BONUS!

1) The man was arrested for brandishing a 12-gauge shotgun outside his home.

Top News Story #6

Stakes high as Obama, McCain head for final debate

With Senator Barack Obama's lead widening in the polls over Senator John McCain, the Republican candidate needs to make up grown quickly. Wednesday night the two candidates will face off in the final of three presidential debates at the University of Hempstead in New York. 

This debate will either seal the deal for Obama or open the door for McCain to catch up on the lead set by the Democrat nominee, according to polls. Both candidates will attempt to address issues such as the financial crisis and domestic policy.

The economic turmoil has reminded the nation of the unpopular policies of President Bush, thus reminding the public of his association with McCain. Therefore, McCain must come out strong in this debate with a set plan on action for the economy. Otherwise, McCain may lose his key voters, since he has already lost his swing voters, which are turning to Obama. 

LINK TO STORY...

Stakes high as Obama, McCain head for final debate

Impact : The lives of American voters will be influenced by this debate. This story is relevant to all American voters due to the fact that this is the final presidential debate before they head into the voting both on November 4th. 

Timeliness : This story is very recent and current, the debate is happening this week and will have lasting effects into the election, and relevance to the politician that will be selected as president. 

Prominence : This story contains high prominence due to the fact that Obama and McCain are in the public eye, through the media, commercials, television, and internet. They are most relevant figures within our country at this time.

Reporting With Numbers

1) A local college releases figures showing that its total busget is $120 million. Of that total, $80 million comes from the state, $6 million from student tuition, and the remaining $34 million from fees, grants, and gifts.

$120 million budget...

66%- State

28%- Fees, grants, gifts

5%- Student tuition

A local college releases figures showing that its total budget is $120 million. Of that total, 66 percent comes from the state, 28 percent comes from fees, grants, and gifts, and five percent comes from student tuition.

2) Your editor assigns you to do a story about prison sentences handed down in cases of aggravated assault. He gives you the following figures from an anti-crime group that is lobbying for tougher sentencing guidelines. The cases represent the people convicted for aggravated assault in San Jose in one month in 2006.

The average prison term is 22 months.

The median prison term is 12 months.

In the cases represented for people convicted of aggravated assault in the city of San Jose, the average prison term served is 22 months. The within the cases is 12 months, this would be the most accurate figure due to the fact that some prisoners served extremely longer than others, which increased the average prison term total dramatically. 

3) The state legislature is considering exempting restaurant food sales from the sales tax in the same way grocery sales are exempt.

State sales tax : 8.25%

Individuals who spend $5 dollars a week would save $21.32 per year if the taxes were exempt.

$5 x 52 weeks = $260 per year

$5 x .0825 = .4125, round down to 41 cents  $5 dollars = 5.41

$5.41 x 52 = $281.32

$281.32 - $260.00 = $21.32

An individual spending $20 per week on food would save $85.28.

AP Style Exercise #4 (M-R)

1. He hopes to make $1 billion by the time he's 40. Already he figures his net worth is between $2 million and $3 million, depending on the current stock prices.

2. Lt. Col. John Carpenter was a Cadet at the U.S. Naval Academy and served in the 7th Fleet.

3. Twenty-one winners were named two days after the 3rd annual Procrastination Award ceremony.

4. It was a one-sided game, and he was a poor loser. After losing the playoff when his ball went out of bounds, he made an off-color remark that could be heard in the stands.

5. Hundreds of people attended Sunday's race to watch 75 top bicyclists pedal across the finish line.

6. Every winter, the Joneses and the Kinneys pore over travel brochures, planning their summer trip together. This year they're hoping to go to Panama City, Fla. 

News Story #5

A runaway truck knocked out power yesterday when it overturned and smashed into a single-story house in El Cerrito, leaving several people injured.

The 10-wheeler truck left a path of destruction, snapped a power pole, and badly damaged five vehicles. Ruben Sharma who lives across the street from the incident said "First I thought it was a major earthquake." Sharma's yard was littered with bricks, broken glass, and car parts.

The accident occurred at 1:30pm yesterday, Sgt. Shawn Maples was the first to arrive at the scene. He heard cries coming from inside the house and the truck. Maples spotted the driver stuck between the wheels of the truck, which had been flipped on its side. Maples was able to grab the driver's hand and with help from Police Chief Scott Kirkland and Detective Ken Zinc, he was able to pull the driver to safety. 

Most cars were not seriously damaged by the incident. A Honda sedan had to have the roof sliced open by rescuers to free the driver, and a sport utility vehicle carrying a man and boy was stuck in some shrubbery beside the burning house.

The driver of the truck, a San Jose man whose name wasn't released was listed as being in serious but stable condition at John Muir Medical Center in Walnut Creek.

News Story #4

A young newlywed couple, whose names were not released, were victims of an attempted carjacking at a local Taco Bell on Saturday.

The suspect Alan Ticas-Soto, 21, attempted to steal the couple's car from the fast-food restaurant's parking lot on 4th street in San Mateo. As the husband was heading toward the restaurant, the suspect jumped into his 2003 Nissan Altima and attempted to drive off while his wife was still in the passenger seat. 

According to police, the couple was unharmed and Ticas-Soto ended up smashing the car into a Taco Bell sign and then fled on foot. The suspect was later arrested by police a few blocks from the crime. 

Ticas-Soto admitted to the police that he had been taking methamphetamines for the past three days. The suspect is now facing felony carjacking charges and misdemeanor drug chargers, Ticas-Soto faces up to nine years in prison if found guilty.

Top News Story #5

Obama accuses McCain of looking for distractions

Sen. Barack Obama has claimed that Sen. John McCain's campaign is lanching "Swift boat-style attacks" on him instead of addressing the country's problems. Alaska Governor and McCain running mate Sarah Palin claimed that Obama associated "with terrorirsts who targeted their own country."

Palin questions Obama's association with William Ayers, a member of the Vietnam-era Weather Underground. Evidence proves Ayers and Obama worked together on community boards for education and hosted a political events early in Obama's career. Clearly, Palin's claims are over-exaggerated if not false, yet the McCain camp is gambling on taking advantage of the American public's ignorance.

Obama responded to the McCain campaign saying "That's what you do when you're out of touch, out of ideas, and running out of time." The McCain campaign continued to insist that these are "true facts" and not "smears." 

Obama accuses McCain of looking for distractions (story link)

We are four weeks away from the 2008 presidential election, so one can expect these attacks between campaigns to continue. While dirty tactics are being used by both sides of the ticket, citizens of America must remember to retain focus on relevant issues within the country. 

It is not surprising that the McCain campaign is quick to pull out the terrorist card on Obama. It was only a few months ago when they made associations with Obama and terrorism due to Sen. Barack Obama's middle name which is Hussien. One must not be ignorant enough to let these attacks persuade them to make a decision of vote based on smear tactics.

These smear campaign tatics by the McCain camp may backfire in the end. Claiming that Barack Obama is affiliated with terrorists only screams out wekaness of a faltering campaign.  Both camps better be ready for these last weeks leading up to the election, because accusations, over-exaggerations, and finger-pointing will continue from both sides.  I guess the truth hurts sometimes.

Video of Sen. Barack Obama's repsonse to attacks...

REVISED ADDITION TO STORY...

Impact : This news story will have major impact on the lives on not only all Americans but the entire world as well. This upcoming election is one of the most important elections of my lifetime, the president selected in this election will have to lead America out of a war disaster and financial crisis, therefore this story impacts everyone.

Timeliness : This story is very current with the political issues at hand and contains relevance to the upcoming election which is only a few weeks away.

Prominence : This story focuses on the two individuals that will lead the country of the free world into the next decade, this individuals are of great importance.

Conflict : There is conflict within this story as it showcases the dirty tactics used with political campaigns by both sides of the ticket.

Copy Edit the World #1

KUWAITIAN FODDS

should be...

KUWAITIAN FOODS

WHY PAY MORE!

should be....

WHY PAY MORE?

FRIENDLY DONUTS

We All So Have Food

Breakfast & Lunch 

should be....

FRIENDLY DONUTS

We Also Have Food

Breakfast & Lunch

News Story #3

An underground gas pipe was severed today near Folsom and 11th street in San Francisco. A private construction crew was working to restore underground sewer lines when the 2-inch pipe was broken. Police shut down a four-block area as a Pacific Gas and Electric crews attempted to repair the damaged pipe.

The South Market area is back up with traffic, and pedestrians are standing along Folsom and 11th street. At least 100 people were forced to leave the area, including neighborhood residents, business owners, and customers.

Carlann Lauria, manager of Crocker's Lockers said her customers were "pretty irate." Crocker's Lockers is a self-storage company on Folsom street, the employees kept busy by staying outside police perimeters and collecting payment from customers.

Another local store manager, Samantha Feldman of Wa-Ha-Ka restaurant, said her employees and patrons were forced to evacuate, which led to her business losing $500 dollars because of the shutdown.

Pacific Gas and Electric reported that gas service was returned at 5:09pm.

Top News Story #4

A hurricane warning was issued for the state of Maine today. The warning is the first for the state in over 17 years according to the National Weather service. Hurricane Kyle formed in the mid Atlantic ocean and is churning northward towards the upper Eastern states, and threatens the New England regions with tropical storm like conditions. 4 inches of rain have already fallen on the upper Eastern coast, and more is expected before the weekend is through.

I read this story on Yahoo News. I believe this new story is important due to the fact that our country is experiencing a rise in hurricanes and natural disasters. Since the recent disaster of Hurricane Katrina in 2005, hurricane seasons have been much more severe then in past years. Some may believe it is due to global warming, which has lead to warmer temperatures around the planet, therefore, warmer temperatures will lead to warmer waters which are prime birthing grounds for hurricanes. Regardless of the cause of the rise of hurricanes, we must look at what we are doing to the planet and understand that mother nature will eventually fight back.

Here is the link for the story...

Hurricane Kyle Heads for Maine

Impact: Thousands of people's lives will be influenced by this hurricane if it makes landfall as a strong hurricane. Hurricanes are the greatest storms on earth and if one makes landfall in a state that hasn't had a hurricane in 17 years, the effects can be disastrous.

Proximity: This story is taking place in the upper Eastern states within our own country. This is much more relevant than Typhoons in the Western Pacific ocean.

AP Style Exercise #3 (I-L)

Please identify and correct the AP and other style errors in the following sentences.

1) There's been no letup all day. After class, I plan to soak in my Jacuzzi and then lie down for a short nap.

2) They call the previous Senator Fred Fried a left-winger because he voted against the Patriot Act.

3) As they unfurled her white sails, the sailboat caught the breeze and began to slice steadily through the waves. Their dream cruise of the Pacific islands had begun.

4) After two days of hard rain and rising waters, the river flooded its banks, leaving the road partly impassable.

AP Style Exercise #2 (E-H)

1) To ensure the accuracy of the new story, Sarah Jones checked with her source. For Jones, this is an everyday practice, not the exception. 

2) As the two boys argued over who should get the last piece of pizza, both seemed equally hungry. Clearly, they had forgotten their earlier decision to forgo having seconds.

3) He suspected his neighbor was selling drugs, so he called the FBI. His neighbor, however, cried foul at the accusation. 

4) She grew up on the Great Plains, near Alliance, N.E., where the winters are long and harsh and the living is hand to mouth.

5) Her car was sideswiped by a hit-and-run driver on Route 1A this morning. She was not injured, but the impact sent the contents of her purse helter-skelter. 

Top News Story #3

A Marriot Hotel in Pakistan was destroyed today when a truck carrying a bomb exploded in the lower garage. The suicide attack killed 40 people and wounded hundreds, dozen more are feared dead inside the building as it still burns. I read this story on Yahoo News. This story continues the terrorist attack that have plagued our world in the new millenium. The hotel was targeted because it is an American chain and it came at a time of growing anger over Pakistans involvement with the United States and Afganistan. I decided to report on this story due to the fact it contains many newsworthy elements. 

This attack of terror effects the lives of people in Pakistan, America, and of those fighting the war on terror. The act shows disapproval of Pakistan's new president Asif Ali Zardari, widower of Minister Benazir Bhutto, and sets up the field for another attack in the coming weeks.

The terrorist attack could not come at a worse time due to the fact America is 6 weeks away from electing a new president of their own. Although this event took place on the other side of the world it effects our own lives here at home dramatically and will effect the future of U.S. international relations. 

News Story #2

A tourist couple from Taipei were robbed at gunpoint yesterday morning in the Saint Mary's Cathedral parking lot, according to.

The victims were WeiMing Chen, 28, and his wife, Li Lu, 30. The couple had left their tour group around 10 a.m. to take pictures in the cathedral's lower parking lot.

A man approached them and waved a pistol as he demanded their money. Chen handed over $100 dollars, a Visa card, passports, camera and airline tickets. The thief then took off running.

The police are searching for the suspect who is described as being about 18 years old, wearing a black jacket and cap. It is unsure wether the couple made their flight back to Taipei before 1pm, Sgt. Lawrence Price of the San Francisco police department said.

News Story #1

Yesterday, firefighters rescued Robert Kent, 50, from a fire in a single-story home on Annapolis Way in San Jose. Kent is retired and lived alone.

According to San Jose fire Captain Rob Piper, the fire began in the kitchen and spread to the attic as smoke engulfed the entire house. No smoke detector was inside the home

Firefighters pulled Kent out of his home as he was surrounded by flames. Kent suffered third-degree burns and is burned on 50 percent of his body. He was found on the floor unconscious, says Piper. The cause of the fire is under investigation.

Lead Exercise #5

Delayed 1

Gross Engineers employee Duane La Chance suffered third-degree burns while installing new pipes on the roof of the Springfield Municipal Power Plant.

The 55-year old pipe fitter was electrocuted when he accidently touched a power line, he is listed in serious condition in the intensive care unit of Springfield Hospital.

Immediate 1

Gross Engineers pipe fitter Duane La Chance lies in critical condition at Springfield Hospital after suffering third degree burns by accidently touching a power line carrying 15,00 volts.

Delayed 2

Two cars collided today on the U.S. 63, just one-tenth a mile north of Blue Ridge Road.

James W. Cunning, 20, and Wayne Clay, 19-years old were involved in the accident after Clay crossed the center line sticking Cunning's vehicle.

Immediate 2

A serious car accident occured today on the U.S. 63 near Blue Ridge Road, both parties suffered minor injuries and are in satisfactory condition at Springfield Hospital.

Leads Exercise #4

Forty passengers evacuated from Northwest Airlines jet.

Forty passengers were evacuated from a Northwest Airlines jet today at LaCrosse, Wis., Municipal Airpot. Flight 428 was spotted having smoke near the wheels by tower employees, following a flight from Minneapolis. 

7-year old missing boy found in Brick Township N.J.

A 7-year old boy who had been missing for three years, was found in Brick Township N.J. on Monday night. A neighbor called police, after recognizing the child's picture when it was shown after the movie Adam : The Song Continues.

Leads Exercise #3

1. Yesterday, comedian and Bard College alumni, Chevy Chase, was appointed to the board of trustees for Bard College in New York.

2. Yesterday at 1:30 p.m. , the Amtrak train, the Colonial, collided with three Conrail locomotives on a switch that merges four tracks into two causing the worst accident in Amtrak's history. The crash happened near Chase, Md., and killed 15 people, injuring 175. Amtrak spokesman, Larry Chase claims the Conrail diesels were headed northbound with the Amtrak trains, and apparently ran a stop sign. 

AP Style Exercise #1 (A-D)

Please find and correct the AP style errors in the following sentences. The number in parentheses at the end of each sentence tells you how many errors are in that sentence. Be sure to consult your AP Stylebook for this exercise.

1) The new head of the Journalism Department, Dr. Deborah Dunwoody, recently bought a house at 6 Riverside Dr. in San Mateo; a lovely city in the San Francisco bay area.

2) "What kind of person would break into my apartment and steal my brand new thongs?" she asked her friend.

3) The instructor asked her students to read Chapter 6 in the text, and to pay close attention to the section on the Great Depression, beginning in the late 1920's and continuing through the 1930's. 

4) Sarah Smith has not let partial blindness nor wheelchair confinement stop her from living her life to the fullest. In spite of her handicaps, she volunteers at a local seniro center and enjoys going for strolls -- she calls them "rolls"-- with her friends.

Lead Exercise #2

Yesterday, a US Air airplane crashed directly into the ground outside of Pittsburgh as it prepared to land. The rash killed all 131 people on board and was flying in from Chicago. This crash is the worst in the United States in the past 3 years. 

Lead Exercise #1

1) A local couple was awarded $150,000 in damages yesterday in Butte County Court for suffering injuries in a traffic accident this past March.

2) Another snowstorm is expected to hit the Sierras today as apart of a series of snowstorms this week.

3) Three firefighters were injured and 41 families were evacuated as a fire roared through a six-story building at 204 Union Ave. today, stated police.

WELCOME TO MY JOURNALISM 61 BLOG

Welcome to my blog for Journalism 61 at San Jose State University.

This class focuses on writing for Print, Electronic, and Online Media. 

On here I will be posting assignments and discussing issues regarding the class.

Feel free to post comments on my posts to make things more interesting.

I am a Radio/Televison/Film major with a minor in Public Relations at San Jose State University. 

In this class I hope to learn how to organize and express my opinions on Media through professional journalism writing. I would like to focus on Electronic and Online Media due to the fact that I use mostly Online Media in my career within the music industry. Also, I feel that Print Media is an outdated business model and will no longer be relevant in the near future. Through the rise of the Internet, Digital Media has changed television, music, and the online world, forcing media corporations to change their ways of doing business. For these reasons I feel it is necessary to understand the importance of Digital Media within our world and allow myself to gain the tools needed to discuss and report on the issues within it.