Saturday, September 20, 2008

Lead Exercise #1

1) A local couple was awarded $150,000 in damages yesterday in Butte County Court for suffering injuries in a traffic accident this past March.

2) Another snowstorm is expected to hit the Sierras today as apart of a series of snowstorms this week.

3) Three firefighters were injured and 41 families were evacuated as a fire roared through a six-story building at 204 Union Ave. today, stated police.

2 comments:

camccune said...

1) Good, but tighten it up a bit: ...for injuries suffered in a March traffic accident.
2) Excellent!

9.5/10

camccune said...

Oops, posted late. That drops it a grade: 8.5/10